developed best idea for thriller

After our first pitching our ideas lesson we sat down as a group and discussed as a group, Me Gil, Owen and Frankie, and we pulled together our strongest ideas that we had.
This was mainly the tent idea. We new that we wanted to use the tent idea in our thriller but we wanted to make it strange so we decided to have the tent inside a house. This makes the idea questionable to the audience which makes it more strange.
Our main character and only character is a middle ages man with: a beard, scard face, funny eyes and wear a convict suit.
For the tent we decided that we would get a large tent with different compartment for his kitcken bed room sitting room all inside the tent. The tent is also going to look extremely messy and look like it has been lived in for a long time. this would have hundreds of lines of strings leading off the tent to different areas of the hall like a trap.
As a set we wanted to use a big old fashioned house with a large door leading into a big hall way with stairs ways going around the room with a the tent in the middle. this would be ideal if we used the string idea because it would look almost like a spider web effect.

 The plot is that the man in the tent wakes up after hearing one of the strings go off then gets out of his tent into the hall way of a large old dusty house, this is when dogs start to howl outside the house doors and the man grabs his axe.